Feedback from rough cut screening

Today we watched the two presentations in our class, ours and the girls opening. This is because we had to do peer assessment, so therefore we got feedback from both the teachers and other classmates. The feedback that we got was very constructive and helpful, as we are using our free periods tomorrow to re shoot three shots (close up of mouth- make longer) ,(entrance to doctors office- shorten) and (more reaction shots of me in doctors office). Also we need to block out any background noise so it is just the music, and voice over when necessary and lastly but probably the most important, we need to add opening credtis such as, production company, director, starring etc.